Taking the Last Breath

May 29, 2009
By Cashasaur SILVER, Monroe Twp., New Jersey
Cashasaur SILVER, Monroe Twp., New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
Of all of the lies you told 'I love you' was my favorite

His heart smashed into the ground
With tears of blood streaming down his cheeks
His mind no longer in control
The darkness now owns it
The voices of the one that he disappointed

Surround him
Taunt him
Then were shut out by her
The one that he truly crushed
Her crying echoing in the wind

Then the silence returned
It came back to claim what was left of his miserable soul
Now his body just lying carelessly on the ground

No soul
No purpose
Just silence
Pure silence
As he toke his last breath

The author's comments:
A little poem I wrote about a year ago.

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