Pleasure You Don't Deserve

June 5, 2009
By MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Life's a mountain on a beach"-Unknown
"Will: This is either madness or brilliance. Sparrow: It's remarkable how often those two traits coincide."-Pirates of the Caribbean:Curse of the Black Pearl.


Rip my hair out-
Toss and turn.
Know you're there
But i just don't care.
I let my heart slip from my grasps.
Let you take it
in an invisible bag.
Then you laughed.
I swear-
Something changed you.
Never knew
this side of you.
My brain was played.
My thoughts manipulated.
I thought I knew.
now know I was wrong.
That bag you took-
came visible,
And you put it on display.
Like an add to your cruelty.
Do you think
others will be as stupid as me?
Probably.
And they'll just keep on coming.
How full is that meter
you keep so tight in your chest?
Ya know-
the place
where your heart should rest.
you've stolen my heart
And I won't beg for it back.
You don't deserve that pleasure.
How-Ever,
You will Give It Back.
But you'll never have me.
You'll go your whole life
Never having a true love to love.
Because you sold me out.
you'll never find someone
who will forgive you
as much as me,
You'll never find someone
Who will hold you dear enough
as much as me.
Those Adds
will come back to haunt you-
For the Bills you never payed.
You created them
And then left them.
The Adds to your cruelty.
You'll die
From Other's pain.
And all I have to say-
I hope you have A Great Life.
Because anything else
Will only give you the pleasure
That you no-longer deserve.

The author's comments:
This isn't something i've felt completly so I hope I've captured the feelings pretty well. Please don't hesitate to give me your thoughts on it!

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on Dec. 4 2010 at 12:32 pm
MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
70 articles 0 photos 181 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a mountain on a beach"-Unknown
"Will: This is either madness or brilliance. Sparrow: It's remarkable how often those two traits coincide."-Pirates of the Caribbean:Curse of the Black Pearl.

ThankYou :u)

on Jun. 17 2009 at 5:37 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
62 articles 1 photo 881 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

i think the emotions and the feelings in this piece is very strong. I like the mood it creates. GREAT JOB!!



~~Thanks for all the comments!! I really appreciate it!




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