May 21, 2009
you breathe it in and it comes out
but what really stays is later found

you can't walk straight you hit the ground
cause after the pain you feel the pound

of past and problems that lay and wait
until you're tired and need a break

by then you find it's to late
you again lost something you can't replace

what did you lose? your heart? your soul?
all you know is something took ahold of you

something you can't control

and yet again you breathe it in
and out comes your lives end

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laena said...
Jul. 1, 2009 at 4:18 pm
Nicole this is one of ur best poems there are probley alot of teens who could relaet to this ya
EB said...
Jun. 23, 2009 at 12:49 am
This is an awesome poem Nicole I love it sis.
Kayla*Marie said...
Jun. 16, 2009 at 7:05 pm
Awesome, its written well.
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