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I stand Darkened

May 27, 2009
By Patrick Tilley BRONZE, San Diego, California
Patrick Tilley BRONZE, San Diego, California
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I stand,
Atop this mount
Looking
Listening
Observing as man degenerates
As nature is overcome
As the future darkens.
I stand,
Atop this mount
Hoping…
Wishing…
For a solution to alight upon me.


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on Jun. 10 2009 at 12:34 am
cmoney1994 PLATINUM, Newark, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
Be the best you an be as you can see i try to be by writing poetry.

This was a great poem check mine out called Marriage or check out WHY name is Christian

on Jun. 7 2009 at 6:22 pm
xXsmileXx PLATINUM, St. Louis, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"Your dreams only become intangible when you stop reaching" ~me ;)

Wow. Nice Work! Its really interesting and it makes you think. Keep writing!