She's like walking sex

May 26, 2009
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She's like walking sex
in those stiletto heels…
GOD I loathe her
dangerous jealousy burns.
At best I'm half of her
curves of a bottle
walks like a model
seduction boils in her eyes
draped by onyx long lashes
skin as smooth as passion
she makes sexy a fashion
I want to be her...
And the proportions of her figure,
guys stair where their hands would linger.
Temptation burns in their fingers.
Pressure to give into her desire,
while lust burns in them like surging fire.
They'll fall to their knees
to bag her please,
she thinks its so delicious,
every boy at her whim
their obsession makes her grin
a body unfailingly erotic
hips perpetually hypnotic.
God!! I hate her..
I could never be that..
she's so perfect.
The kind of girl who is polished
without defect
blessed with perfection
legs so long
that you'll never forget
the way she walks.
And your heart, she’ll captivate
With her faultless face.
Hated by all women
and desired by all men.
She's walking sex
I could never be that perfect.

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LeapBaby29 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 31, 2011 at 4:05 pm
Besides a few awkward lines and  spelling mistakes, this poem is great. It has interesting language and definately describes the way I feel when I open up a magazine.
VisionTrue This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 1, 2009 at 1:06 pm
i like it alot...the way it went into the details, i could actually picture it.. I love it!
pinkvolleyballgirl said...
May 31, 2009 at 9:46 pm
i really dont think it is appropriate. While your topic is unique, its a little too risque for this sight. and stair should be stare
Paige V. replied...
Sept. 12, 2009 at 11:23 am
Actually, It's an everyday issue with young females today, and this is exactly what most of us see. All the author did was describe what she saw, so in all technicality, the SUBJECT (the female in the poem) is the risque one..
lovehate29 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 29, 2009 at 4:37 pm
Wow! This is truly outstanding! I loved it! I agree with you. When I was young, I used to see women in videos or on TV or in magazines and I would envy them. I would try so hard to be like them, but then as I got older and gained self-esteem, I would just see these girls and just say "She's gorgeous" or "She's pretty". I always love myself no matter what and I will never try to be something or someone I'm not. Envy is a deadly sin!

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