March 28, 2009 (a)

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My body curled up
Against your beating heart.
Its pace, noticeably fast.
I've never been so in love.
With the cool of your face,
Its softness, enticing.

My face gazing
Into your blue eyes.
Their sparkle, amazingly new.
I've never felt this way.
Never been content to be wrapped
In one's arms.
Strong enough to carry me, tireless.

My most whimsical fancy,
Dictating my mind,
Is instantly full filled
As you scoop me up
And sway across the room.

My neck supported
With your arm beneath.
Our heads wrapped around each other.
Content to stare and smile
With thoughts kept anon.
Unspoken, yet, known.

My eyes search
Through the darkness.
They locate you.
My grin grows and,
Our hands,
Complete an unknown puzzle
As if it was set in stars.
Perfect in every way.





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ShernayB. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 9, 2010 at 6:31 am
Just wonderful. Your words are so powerful, i actually feel like i'm being pulled into the piece, like its hypnotizing me. Haha. Amazing descriptions. I love it!!
 
kiwi12 said...
Dec. 28, 2009 at 3:17 pm
i can relate to this... or i want to to. it's wonderful.
 
kiwi12 replied...
Dec. 28, 2009 at 4:33 pm
sorry for the double to. oops! typing too fast while thinking twice!
 
Inkspired said...
Jun. 1, 2009 at 11:41 pm
Poetry is your medium! You convey the feelings of love amazingly with showing, not telling as I always seem to do. Love it! Keep it up!
 
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