May 18, 2009
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Trapped in his own mind
words he chooses not to speak
he feels so alone
a real life is what he seeks

He has everything
right before his eyes
but he drinks and yells
and she dies a little inside

A girl that sits and watches her father
be unhappy and depressed
she tries to help
but there is nothing he'll confess

He says she is a mistake
and she shouldn't be here
she brings him another beer as told
with eyes full of tears

I'm sorry Daddy
for whatever I did
and that you hate me
give me a chance,
I'm only a kid

You'll never know
what your drinking does to me
you're always so drunk and angry
you're never sober to see

I know you've been through a lot
and things aren't the way they should be
but Dad, I hurt inside, too
do you EVER think about me?

I will always love you
deep down inside
but the day you ever say it back
I won't be alive

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Anjo! said...
May 26, 2009 at 2:52 am
Oh my gosh, i am crying. this is sooooooooooooo amazing. please keep writing.. you have touched my heart. wow.
!a.s.p. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 24, 2009 at 10:32 pm
This is truly beautiful. I've been there and I know exactly where you're coming from - it's really emotional, and I absolutely love it.
MariaMarie This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 23, 2009 at 7:02 pm
Wow, powerful. sad, i can really feel the words coming alive inside me.
Anupama said...
May 23, 2009 at 10:01 am
Ouch, this poem touched my heart.
Brilliant work!
Kay-Pay said...
May 22, 2009 at 6:50 pm
Wow!! This put tears in my eyes!!! You are an amazing poet.Keep writing!!
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