May 18, 2009
By @m@z!ng=) SILVER, Moncks Corner, South Carolina
@m@z!ng=) SILVER, Moncks Corner, South Carolina
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she sits there in a quiet daze, looking at the things that surround her.
why is she here, she sits and asks herself.
looking back into her past she sees all of those dark mistakes, creeping upon her, like a misty fog over the lake.
wondering, watching and waiting she doesn't know what will happen next.
she just sits there pondering all kinds of events,
she takes a breath because i think she's done living in her past, she's so ready to move on and leave all of those things behind her.
she's scared to leave her past behind because of the people in it.
she's got to let them go before she can start to better herself.
she's letting everything she ever knew go, she is putting it all behind her, so one day she'll be able to look up, smile, and be ready to face tommorow.

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on May. 30 2009 at 11:59 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

This is very good! I can truly, honestly say, that I could definitely relate to your piece. It's very emotional and I could tell it was written from the heart. Good job!!!!

on May. 26 2009 at 1:15 pm
@m@z!ng=) SILVER, Moncks Corner, South Carolina
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thanks guys.

i'm glad you can relate too it.

life is an everyday struggle,you just have to live with it whether you want to or not.

on May. 23 2009 at 7:05 pm
MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Life's a mountain on a beach"-Unknown
"Will: This is either madness or brilliance. Sparrow: It's remarkable how often those two traits coincide."-Pirates of the Caribbean:Curse of the Black Pearl.

This is something i hope to be able to do someday. I just had a thought, what if the time i choose to do this i can get my bff to do it with me? He could use it as much as me- but once again, letting the people go.. I'm not sure if i'll ever be strong enough to do that :) Love it! -really like "Misty fog over the lake" Nice vision.

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on May. 22 2009 at 7:32 pm
laneyb GOLD, St Paul, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
I am a quote addict. I spend majority of my time writing down quotes I hear.

I am with you here!

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