i saw you

May 16, 2009
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I saw you today
i saw you, and my heart began to quake
i saw you today
i saw you and my hands began to shake

i felt you near
my love for you;my deepest fear

i saw you today
i saw you today; words i could no longer make
i saw you today
i saw you today ; my love i say is fake

i heard your voice
and cupid took away thy choice

i saw you today
and no longer can i fake
forced without wake
my heart at stake

i loved you today
and thy skies turned gray





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xBaByGiRrL22x said...
Nov. 17, 2010 at 10:09 pm
awww this is beautiful. so sweet(; i especially love "And cupid took away thy choice." You're a really gr8 writerrr. plz keep writinggg !! nd good luckkk ! ;D
 
sasssgirrrl22 said...
Nov. 17, 2010 at 10:06 pm
i loveeee it(:
 
ShernayB. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 5, 2010 at 3:00 am
Beautiful. And thoughtful.
 
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