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Slipping farther away
Out of my grasp
Oh how I don’t want that to happen.
What will happen next?

Something is changing.
And I’m scared to know what it is.
To see the out come of this mystery.
Will you tell me?

I pray that it is good.
But my gut says different.
Oh please, don’t slip away.




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Lyrabear said...
Oct. 8, 2009 at 11:52 am:
Love it, Very cute
 
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*ZkiGgY* said...
Jul. 22, 2009 at 12:32 am:
wow its pretty... it reminds me of some one too... i also wrote about them kinda XD good job!
 
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kidlet612 said...
Jul. 21, 2009 at 6:53 pm:
this is astonomical. you are definently a phenominal writier, its amazing how you can say so much, in just a few words. [[thank you for your comment on my poetry by the way, it brightened my day, so thank you darling]]
 
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cree8ive said...
Jul. 12, 2009 at 11:19 pm:
this poem reminds me of somebody i used to be really close with. i like your style, it reminds me a lot of my own. good work.
 
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scotttyboy said...
Jul. 11, 2009 at 9:11 pm:
hey.....just wanted to say that i completley understand this poem....you're an awesome writer! i look forward to reading more of your work!
 
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TYRON said...
Jun. 8, 2009 at 6:01 pm:
this is so cute
 
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