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Mixed Feelings

May 15, 2009
By NamezTJ PLATINUM, Scottsville, New York
NamezTJ PLATINUM, Scottsville, New York
29 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is like a box of chocolates...." (haha got to love Forest Gump)


When fun dies
Its is sad
So you sit
and Cry

When you hurt
You dispise
So you seek
your revenge

When you hurt an other
You feel guilt
That's why
You apologise

Where someone is hurt
you sympathise
That's when
You give him a hug.

Being in love
is not funny
but then why, may i ask
does it cause you to smile?



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on Nov. 22 2009 at 7:24 pm
bamboom212 PLATINUM, Chestnut Ridge, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"The truth with a bad intent, is worse than any lie you can ever invent."
"You are smarter than you think. You are stronger than you look. You are braver than you feel."

No prob. I liked readin em :D hope 2 c more ^_^

on Nov. 20 2009 at 11:45 am
NamezTJ PLATINUM, Scottsville, New York
29 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is like a box of chocolates...." (haha got to love Forest Gump)

thanks! I've noticed you've commented on a couple of my poems :D Ty I need the feedback.

on Nov. 9 2009 at 7:08 pm
bamboom212 PLATINUM, Chestnut Ridge, New York
23 articles 0 photos 155 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The truth with a bad intent, is worse than any lie you can ever invent."
"You are smarter than you think. You are stronger than you look. You are braver than you feel."

I like this alot 2. It makes perfect sense while getting right 2 the point. Ur really good :)

on Nov. 3 2009 at 4:39 pm
NamezTJ PLATINUM, Scottsville, New York
29 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is like a box of chocolates...." (haha got to love Forest Gump)

thanks it means a lot :)

amyxu said...
on Jun. 15 2009 at 7:25 pm
Hey I was browsing Teen Ink and I came across your poem. I like how it gets the point across in a small amount of space and yet how it doesn't feel overcrowded or in-your-face. Good job!


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