(Sadly) Just Friends

May 18, 2009
By Ashlie94 BRONZE, Peru, Kansas
Ashlie94 BRONZE, Peru, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
Don't give up and don't give in.. cause the info you give out,you can't take back in.


Every weekend, every night,
I'm here, your gone, hidden from sight.
But is hiding the key, a solution, a flaw?
I guess i'll never know, cause your all i saw.
Even when he kissed me, my eyes were on you.
Wishing you were the one i was talking to.
But life doesn't work on dreams,
and trying to make it work ain't quite what it seems.
Cause it's always a struggle,a battle, a brawl,
Sitting here by the phone wishing you would call.
and just to hear your voice, See you again,
I would deal with us, Just being friends.


The author's comments:
This is actualy about a guy. He doesnt realize he inspired me, But he hurt me and used me, and it made me realize people aren't always what they seem. But, jsut because you get hurt once doesn't mean you have to stay on the ground. Stand up, and show people who you really are. I'm not saying i'm over that guy. I'm not, but that doesn't mean let him get the satisfaction of hurting you. Don't sulk. Get up and do something. Like write, or get active.

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on Mar. 22 2010 at 3:56 pm
VampiericRain GOLD, Amarillo, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Would you like a side of epic with that fail?

I have gone through the exact same thing, and it stinks. Faved.

Could you look at one of my pieces called "Two Worlds"? I'd love to get your opinion on it.

on Mar. 22 2010 at 10:02 am
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

i think everyone experiences the whole "just friends" thing....ive been there done that and it sucks! :/ but i love the fact that you used all that tender, raw emotion to create such a wonderful poem :) it's beautiful. the flow and rhyming is amazing. and i can feel all the emotion and energy. it's honestly amazing :) i wish i could give you more than 5 stars! would you mind checking out my piece "take my broken heart"? id LOVE your opinion :) thanks and please please please keep writing :) :)




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