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(Sadly) Just Friends

Every weekend, every night,
I'm here, your gone, hidden from sight.
But is hiding the key, a solution, a flaw?
I guess i'll never know, cause your all i saw.
Even when he kissed me, my eyes were on you.
Wishing you were the one i was talking to.
But life doesn't work on dreams,
and trying to make it work ain't quite what it seems.
Cause it's always a struggle,a battle, a brawl,
Sitting here by the phone wishing you would call.
and just to hear your voice, See you again,
I would deal with us, Just being friends.





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***Rain*** said...
Mar. 22, 2010 at 3:56 pm
I have gone through the exact same thing, and it stinks. Faved.
Could you look at one of my pieces called "Two Worlds"? I'd love to get your opinion on it.
 
dreamer_believer said...
Mar. 22, 2010 at 10:02 am
i think everyone experiences the whole "just friends" thing....ive been there done that and it sucks! :/ but i love the fact that you used all that tender, raw emotion to create such a wonderful poem :) it's beautiful. the flow and rhyming is amazing. and i can feel all the emotion and energy. it's honestly amazing :) i wish i could give you more than 5 stars! would you mind checking out my piece "take my broken heart"? id LOVE your opinion :) thanks and please plea... (more »)
 
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