It's Just Me

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I pray to God in the day
I pray to God at night
I wake up to nothing
And nothing holds me tight

I feel blue all the time
Like the world is falling down
But it has already happened
I'm pushed under everything
I lye still below my own self

I am all alone
In this little world
On my own island of ego
Nothing can reach me
Not even you





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chillkid89 said...
May 20, 2009 at 4:33 am
if you like this poem then you'll love my friends poem "Empty" :)
 
kaura G. said...
May 20, 2009 at 3:29 am
its cute, very good. i do think its very sad, but htats also why i like it. you do good keep writing!
 
rinaLOVE This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 20, 2009 at 1:20 am
is this poem about a certain someone?
and also, when you speak of "nothing"
[i wake up to nothing/ nothing holds me tight] i give you extreme praise on that line. it's beautiful, and gives a vivd picture of... well, nothing. :) beautiful, and if it is [or isnt] about someone, id appreciate to know what gave you this idea. =) Im Rina btw. nice to meet you
 
KICK3593 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 19, 2009 at 7:10 pm
Interesting, but pessimistic. Why is everyone so much an atagonist to this narrator?
 
VisionTrue This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 19, 2009 at 3:54 pm
i like this one.
 
Griffinwing said...
May 19, 2009 at 1:11 pm
This poem is beautiful. Lie is spelled as lye, is that on purpose? There are times I feel like what you are saying in this poem.
 
MorningStar15 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 19, 2009 at 12:31 pm
wow lol :)
 
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