I have never known
what to do for my haikus
so i wrote this one.
what to do for my haikus
so i wrote this one.
Duckie430
carolinesi think it is great you are going for the haiku!
i think it is basically impossible so--good job!!!
i think it is basically impossible so--good job!!!
SaraB.Love this one. Don't be sorry about the Scribbler of Dreams comment, it was a REALLY good book, it deserves a comment. I love your haikus, they actually inspired me to write a few, but after I submitted them, I realized one had 6 syllables in the 1st line. oh well. You are a great writer. :)
His-Bright-Green-Eyes...Well it has two five silable lines and one seven sillable in the middle so it is a haiku. I thought it was good. Most people wouldn't even think about that! Brilliant! And thank you for the poem on my "As i wait for fall" poem!
HayWireyeah.. i am completely incompetent at haiku... great job
SilverDawnhaha, that was cute. sounds like poetry homework that kids hand in to their teachers x) write about nature next time (:
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