The Last Me on Earth

May 12, 2009
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You are the only one of your kind
There is only one "your name here"
mind
For the closest thing to you (a clone)
Cannot be you for you are you alone
And if you happen to have a twin
They are not you, they're only akin
You are the last you on Earth
You've been the final you ever since birth
And if anyone says there's two of you
That's obviously definitely not very true





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hbwriter This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 18, 2009 at 9:48 pm
awesome title!
 
EdytD said...
May 17, 2009 at 2:14 am
I agree - you could do a lot with this idea, but you stick to the surface of the idea that you're the only one. discuss the clone, the feeling of being yourself - put in some interesting images and comparisons, and you could have a great poem. :)
 
<3::wish4wings::<3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 17, 2009 at 1:27 am
this was good
and the meaning was unmistakeably true
 
kaura G. said...
May 16, 2009 at 3:47 pm
hahaha. thats cute. good job
 
KICK3593 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 15, 2009 at 10:38 pm
An interesting poem, but nevertheless holds not much else other than the depth declared in your rhyming verses.
 
surfacebreaker said...
May 15, 2009 at 6:01 pm
Like your title. That's only icing on the cake though.
 
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