May 12, 2009
By mark bethka BRONZE, Anchorage, Alaska
mark bethka BRONZE, Anchorage, Alaska
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t ucks it’s head inside it’s shell

u ses it for protecion

t akes a peak out side

r elizes its safe

l eaps into the water and

e njoys a quick bath


round, smooth
i chop the ongens, throw them in and...


The author's comments:
my best freind loves turtles

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on Sep. 8 2011 at 12:32 pm
mark bethka BRONZE, Anchorage, Alaska
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hahahahaha thanks Daynene!

on May. 20 2009 at 2:48 am
supakewl#1 BRONZE, Fairway, Kansas
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Diffrent but I like it. write some more weird poems.

on May. 19 2009 at 3:16 am
KICK3593 PLATINUM, Roslyn Heights, New York
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Not only is it weird, but it attempts humor, which is kind of degrading in my point of view. Not to mention that this is nothing special.

Try reading the Grapes of Wrath, Chpt. 3. Its all about a turtle.

I know this is tough criticism, but I've got a say to give.

melcat SILVER said...
on May. 19 2009 at 12:38 am
melcat SILVER, Menifee, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Ambition is just a dream with a V8 engine ." - Elvis Presley

well, call me narrow-minded or whatever you like, but that's just weird.

but, you know, whatever is your cup of tea... i guess.

on May. 18 2009 at 10:20 pm
kmpoetgirl7 PLATINUM, Phillips, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"You must be in control of the authorship of your own destiny. The pen that writes your life story must be held in your own hand." Irene C. Kassorla

haha. cool. :) yeah, you had the second T and R switched around... oh well. good poem tho!!

on May. 18 2009 at 10:01 pm
xXsmileXx PLATINUM, St. Louis, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"Your dreams only become intangible when you stop reaching" ~me ;)

You spelled turtle wrong... but i still got it and its still a good poem. I like it.

on May. 18 2009 at 5:01 pm
Caitlyn_ilovesoftball GOLD, Douds, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
"Hello Cat-i-lynn Mill-ard-o," -friends
"Stop saying that!! My name ain't Cat-i-lynn Mill-ard-o!!" -Me
"Okay, fine, Hello Cat."-friends
"You a turtle on steroids!"-friends
"Hahaha, I know" -ME


on May. 18 2009 at 1:17 pm
Huckleberry Finn BRONZE, Saint Joseph, Michigan
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you spelled turtles wrong...nice

on May. 15 2009 at 11:57 pm
Twilightnme SILVER, Anchorage, Alaska
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Favorite Quote:
"You dont know what you have until its gone"

wow. thatw a weird one. Ms brown must have liked it

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