turtles

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t ucks it’s head inside it’s shell


u ses it for protecion







t akes a peak out side






r elizes its safe






l eaps into the water and





e njoys a quick bath



egg

round, smooth
hatch,fried,yum
i chop the ongens, throw them in and...


omelet





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supakewl#1 said...
May 20, 2009 at 2:48 am
Diffrent but I like it. write some more weird poems.
 
KICK3593 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 19, 2009 at 3:16 am
Not only is it weird, but it attempts humor, which is kind of degrading in my point of view. Not to mention that this is nothing special.
Try reading the Grapes of Wrath, Chpt. 3. Its all about a turtle.

I know this is tough criticism, but I've got a say to give.
 
melanie B. said...
May 19, 2009 at 12:38 am
well, call me narrow-minded or whatever you like, but that's just weird.

but, you know, whatever is your cup of tea... i guess.
 
kmpoetgirl7 said...
May 18, 2009 at 10:20 pm
haha. cool. :) yeah, you had the second T and R switched around... oh well. good poem tho!!
 
xXsmileXx This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 18, 2009 at 10:01 pm
You spelled turtle wrong... but i still got it and its still a good poem. I like it.
 
Caitlyn M. said...
May 18, 2009 at 5:01 pm
Interesting
 
Huckleberry F. said...
May 18, 2009 at 1:17 pm
you spelled turtles wrong...nice
 
Twilightnme said...
May 15, 2009 at 11:57 pm
wow. thatw a weird one. Ms brown must have liked it
 
Mark B. replied...
Sept. 8, 2011 at 12:32 pm
hahahahaha thanks Daynene!
 
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