The War Inside Me

May 9, 2009
By Godisgreat<3 BRONZE, Noblesville, Indiana
Godisgreat<3 BRONZE, Noblesville, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"Forever and ever babe"

I'm calling for you, buried under
my silk dirt. Children screaming,
mothers crying. I miss caressing your body in my hands, now all I
have to touch is the blood on
her eyes. I'm just sliding down
my black pit. My own hell is
consuming my mind. My veins
pulsing, heart racing. Everything's
broken, repalying its deadly music
on my fingers. It's like a record
in a lonely house. The gun shots
one by one. My brothers are here
holding me down from my own
fate. Let me die, let me see her
face flash through my eyes.

The author's comments:
This piece I wrote here is the truth and reality of the war we are experincing today. I am not hiding anything. People need to see what is going on, and not hide the feelings that are developing in each of us

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