Road Trip With A Deatth Wish

May 8, 2009
By Andrewsaur BRONZE, La Porte, Texas
Andrewsaur BRONZE, La Porte, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
\\\\\\\"Time brings all things to life, in that I trust it so.\\\\\\\" ~ Willie Stark


I see the bllood spill from your sleeve
its like there's a party in your arteries but everybody's leaving
cause they're tired of this scene
living their channel change lives
too bad there are too many channels with too little on
cause the camera men quit
they were tired of the hours
in the old abandoned towers
you're just a little bit short
but you're all out of rope
and its time to go home cause we're all out of hope
and when the road signs speak louder than you
its time to stop staring
and start glaring
so wear you fancy face scars
and cut another smile across your lips
just so nobody knows
you're deead inside.


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on Jul. 10 2012 at 2:04 pm
sunshine925 GOLD, Sugar Land, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
" You're only as tall as your heart will let you be and you're only as small as the world will make you seem." - Christofer Drew Ingle

oh my god...FANTASTIC!!!...that's all i have to say about that...carry on with your incredible awesomeness. :)

on Jan. 16 2012 at 4:18 pm
phoebesara BRONZE, Bloomsburg, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"All say, 'how hard it is that we have to die'-a strange complaint to come from the mouths of people who have had to live." ---- Mark Twain

chilling.....this is so good....i got goosebumps from your brutal honesty and raw emotions

on Jan. 16 2012 at 12:22 pm
Pamplemousse SILVER, Gilbert, Arizona
7 articles 1 photo 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To be happy, Don't do whatever you like, Like whatever you do" -James Barrie (author of Peter Pan)

Wow! Your work is all so deep and profound and just beautiful!

takeitasitis said...
on Aug. 25 2011 at 10:17 am
takeitasitis, Lakeville, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Life may cause you to suffer, but you can learn a lot from pain.

your poetry is dark. that's part of what makes it wonderful. i can appreciate your writing style, because it's much like mine. i was wondering, since our writing styles are so alike, if you could comment on my short story, Finish Me Off. I don't mean this to be a self-serving comment, but i was just wondering. thanks. love the poem.

on Aug. 15 2011 at 12:35 pm
WhoWillCareIfEveryoneDied GOLD, Indianapolis, Indiana
12 articles 1 photo 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
My life is everything but so were you, My life is unscratchable but then you riped me apart.

OOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMGGGGGGGGG II THINK I MIGHT BE IN LOVE WITH YOUR WORK :) IM PETRIFIDE AT HOW AWEFUL I AM AND HOW AMAZING YOU ARE :O

 


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on Jul. 25 2011 at 12:12 am
Mikieslove, Harrisburg, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
I have soo many its way to hard to choos one

WOW!! i love this ! its, its AMAZING!! i love the way you paint a picture with words and the words u describe with the way they are put together are fabulous wow thats awesome!!

Brewhit SILVER said...
on Jun. 10 2011 at 8:56 pm
Brewhit SILVER, Tamaroa, Illinois
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I envy you so much. You are a fantastic writer. I love your poems. :)

on Feb. 19 2011 at 10:37 am
shreya756 PLATINUM, Gurgaon, Haryana, Other
27 articles 4 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
When it gets dark only then can you see the stars...
If a million people believe in a foolish thing, it is still a foolish thing.

When I read what you write, I feel alive inside. So, thank you :)

RiaRen SILVER said...
on Jun. 1 2010 at 8:16 pm
RiaRen SILVER, New Bothwell, Other
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hey!! this is awesome... i really liked the last four lines.... good job.. i read some of your other stuff and it was fantastic... its great!! :) keep writing....

on Apr. 19 2010 at 5:50 pm
xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"The goal isn't to live forever, but create something that will."
"If you wanna go, baby let's go; if you wanna rock, I'm ready to roll.''
"No one ever said it'd be easy. They just said it'd be worth it." <3

woww. incredible. i luvv the rhyme scheme!! my favorite is the ending, it waz perfect. plz keep writingg

Eilatan GOLD said...
on Apr. 6 2010 at 7:21 pm
Eilatan GOLD, Old Greenwich, Connecticut
11 articles 1 photo 307 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Nobody is normal. Everybody in the world is a weirdo freak. Except you, which makes you a weirdo freak."

Amazing.

My favorite part is 'you're just a little bit short/but you're all out of rope/and it's time to go home cause we're all out of hope'

beautiful rhymescheme, beautiful poem... beautiful everything. Andrewsaur, I love your work.


on Mar. 27 2010 at 6:49 pm
francinejar SILVER, Chino Hills, California
7 articles 1 photo 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
God and the devil are raging inside me.

I think your a realy great writer

 


on Mar. 5 2010 at 10:11 am
sunnyhunny PLATINUM, Litchfield, New Hampshire
22 articles 3 photos 329 comments

Favorite Quote:
"An eye for an eye makes the whole world blind."
-Ghandi

I wish I had your creativity!

on Dec. 7 2009 at 12:00 pm
KJHKJHU89HKJ SILVER, Sadf, Texas
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I quite enjoyed this one, how old are you?

Berry BRONZE said...
on Nov. 15 2009 at 7:45 am
Berry BRONZE, Honiton, Other
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Hey I love all your work! This is really dark, I'm not even sure I understand what your thinking but that doesn't really matter, what matters is that the words flow beautifully. Have you ever read the Rubayat of Omar Khayyam? I'm not sure thats how you spell it, but for some reason what you write reminds me of it. It has the same rolling tone.

So anyway, it's different which makes it very, very excellent x


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