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My Sister's Smile

When my sister smiles the sun comes out
For she is the sunlight of my life

When her face shines bright it shows love and kindness
It beams from her from morning to night

Joy and hugs come from her wonderful smile
It shines brightly for miles and miles

For she is my only sister
For she is the sunlight of my life



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chethu said...
Nov. 29, 2011 at 12:23 am:
i realy liked the poem so mutch i can feel the love towrds ur sister...i to have a loveing sister
 
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dreamer_believer said...
Aug. 23, 2009 at 5:46 pm:
i think your sister should be honored that you wrote a great poem like this :) it's great, has a lot of depth and meaning, great content, good formatting. it's all around very good :) well done! check out some of my work and comment/rate, i love the comments!
 
thedaydreamer13 replied...
Apr. 1, 2010 at 3:48 pm :
thxs for commenting! i will have to come take a look at some of your work soon!
 
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SilverDawn said...
Jun. 20, 2009 at 4:48 pm:
that was really cute and repeating the 2nd line gave it all the more significance. now i wish i had a sister like your's. the poem is so happyful (:
 
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lovehate29 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 14, 2009 at 12:26 am:
awwwwwwww, that is sweet. This piece is beautiful.
 
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daisydee123 said...
May 16, 2009 at 3:03 pm:
wow this is really good its awesome that you love your sister soooo much! thanks for the comment i will use the tip on future poetry. thanks! keep up the good work!
 
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thedaydreamer13 said...
May 13, 2009 at 7:43 pm:
thanks for reading!! i hope you post your comments to help me become a getter writer!!
 
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piratequeen said...
May 12, 2009 at 8:07 pm:
i think this poem is awsome!! this should be #1!! great job monica... keep up the good work. P.S. i know you will... quink quink! hehe
 
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bookhugger14 said...
May 11, 2009 at 10:14 pm:
awww! how sweet sounds like someone loves their sister a lot. i like the rhyme scheme. keep on writing girlie!
 
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