Yet Again...

May 2, 2009
Paranoia sets in
As the last light fades away
Of the old days
Set and spin
Forever will the memories stay
As I try to stop the replay
This infection
You let control
Now will take both our souls
Oh how I've tried to tell you
This isn't the only way
But you never listened
Not even for a day
You had to insist
Not you but I was all to blame
I see you in the distance
As you walk away...
Yet again

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elfiewrites said...
Apr. 17, 2010 at 3:43 pm
EXCELLENT! I love this! Keep on writing! Please, if you get the chance, give me feedback on some of my work too! Much appreciated. Keep up the good work
MyFairyTaleEnding said...
Mar. 8, 2010 at 9:34 pm
This is amazing! I totally can relate to it. You have TRUE talent there! My poems aren't that good. Not enough to make a room fall silent in true awe, like yours can. I love this! I'm adding this to my faves. GREAT JOB
xodistantdreamerxo replied...
Mar. 9, 2010 at 11:50 am
That is such a huge compliment to me, thank you so much! I can assure you that my poety didn't turn out like this overnight, and I still don't believe that my work is that amazing compared to others especially published writers. But, keep writing never give up! Thank you again, it truly does mean so much to me! :D
MyFairyTaleEnding replied...
Mar. 13, 2010 at 3:48 pm
Well, it's the truth! :) You are SO very welcome. I promise to never give up. YOU ARE AMAZING AT WRITING. :D I mean it.
xodistantdreamerxo replied...
Mar. 14, 2010 at 8:21 am
Thank you so much! I won't stop writing. It's something I love so I assure you I won't stop.
TheWritician said...
Mar. 7, 2010 at 11:08 am
so great that I added it to my favorites!
xodistantdreamerxo replied...
Mar. 7, 2010 at 2:54 pm
That's a huge compliment! Thank you so much! (:
Nikiblue said...
Mar. 5, 2010 at 6:51 pm
That was powerful and relateable, very nice (:
xodistantdreamerxo replied...
Mar. 5, 2010 at 7:00 pm
Thank youuuuu! :D
Ambie said...
Mar. 4, 2010 at 6:29 pm
NICE!!! It's short, but interesting!!! You have major talent!!!
xodistantdreamerxo replied...
Mar. 4, 2010 at 7:53 pm
Wow, thank you! I truly do appreciate all the wonderful feedback and motivation! (:
Ambie replied...
Mar. 5, 2010 at 11:46 am
You're welcome!!!
Morissa said...
May 23, 2009 at 10:11 pm
xodistantdreamerxo replied...
Feb. 21, 2010 at 1:09 pm
Thanks so much!
AnnBeck said...
May 12, 2009 at 9:58 pm
xodistantdreamerxo replied...
Feb. 21, 2010 at 1:13 pm
Love you Ann! Thanks for all your support!
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