Last Thought

May 1, 2009
By LonersDayDream89 SILVER, Cabin John, Maryland
LonersDayDream89 SILVER, Cabin John, Maryland
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I was walking on my own
Trying to find my way home
I stopped to look around
As the rain started pouring down

For so many years
And so many thoughts
There's nothing to remember
And nothing to think about

I was running down the mountain
Trying to find my own little fountain
My fountain of memories
That have longed to be freed

I was searching for a hand
A hand to hold and to understand
Understand the way I think my thoughts
And how I fight battles already been fought

Inside nor out
Doesn't anyone know what this is about
I am who I am
Don't try to change me
Just try to understand

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This article has 5 comments.

wolflover6 said...
on May. 11 2009 at 3:54 pm
this made me think of the way that things in my life are going. don't let anyone change yo, you are perfect in this way.

on May. 10 2009 at 11:29 pm
jennnnnnn BRONZE, Irvine, California
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i like the message of your poem, i think a lot of people yearn for someone who wont judge and who will just understand

but i think that your poem contains very simple ideas, and i think you can expand on some things like the fountain you describe and the rain pouring down.

but all in all, with some practice, you could be a very great poet :)

itd be nice if you could check out my stuff too, thanks!

on May. 10 2009 at 1:28 am
nxexnxaxj BRONZE, Leominster, Massachusetts
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this is cute =]

Batwoman GOLD said...
on May. 9 2009 at 2:15 pm
Batwoman GOLD, Middlebury, Indiana
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Awwhh that was so sweet and amazing I loved it!!!!

on May. 9 2009 at 1:22 am
blackamethyst GOLD, Centerville, Ohio
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i love your poem, especially the last stanza


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