All Nonfiction
- Bullying
- Books
- Academic
- Author Interviews
- Celebrity interviews
- College Articles
- College Essays
- Educator of the Year
- Heroes
- Interviews
- Memoir
- Personal Experience
- Sports
- Travel & Culture
All Opinions
- Bullying
- Current Events / Politics
- Discrimination
- Drugs / Alcohol / Smoking
- Entertainment / Celebrities
- Environment
- Love / Relationships
- Movies / Music / TV
- Pop Culture / Trends
- School / College
- Social Issues / Civics
- Spirituality / Religion
- Sports / Hobbies
All Hot Topics
- Bullying
- Community Service
- Environment
- Health
- Letters to the Editor
- Pride & Prejudice
- What Matters
- Back
Summer Guide
- Program Links
- Program Reviews
- Back
College Guide
- College Links
- College Reviews
- College Essays
- College Articles
- Back
Last Thought
May 1, 2009
I was walking on my own
Trying to find my way home
I stopped to look around
As the rain started pouring down
For so many years
And so many thoughts
There's nothing to remember
And nothing to think about
I was running down the mountain
Trying to find my own little fountain
My fountain of memories
That have longed to be freed
I was searching for a hand
A hand to hold and to understand
Understand the way I think my thoughts
And how I fight battles already been fought
Inside nor out
Doesn't anyone know what this is about
I am who I am
Don't try to change me
Just try to understand
Similar Articles
Previous Next
JOIN THE DISCUSSION
This article has 5 comments.
wolflover6 said...
on May. 11 2009 at 3:54 pm
this made me think of the way that things in my life are going. don't let anyone change yo, you are perfect in this way.
i like the message of your poem, i think a lot of people yearn for someone who wont judge and who will just understand
but i think that your poem contains very simple ideas, and i think you can expand on some things like the fountain you describe and the rain pouring down.
but all in all, with some practice, you could be a very great poet :)
itd be nice if you could check out my stuff too, thanks!
but i think that your poem contains very simple ideas, and i think you can expand on some things like the fountain you describe and the rain pouring down.
but all in all, with some practice, you could be a very great poet :)
itd be nice if you could check out my stuff too, thanks!
blackamethyst GOLD said...
on May. 9 2009 at 1:22 am
i love your poem, especially the last stanza
