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If i told you

April 29, 2009
By Savanah_banana15 BRONZE, Sierra Vista, Arizona
Savanah_banana15 BRONZE, Sierra Vista, Arizona
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If i told you i was yours forever
and you were forever mine
would you lock me in your arms
or would you let me fall behind

If i told you that i loved you
and i wanted you to stay
would you say you loved me too
or would you simply walk away

If i told you i was very sick
i was about to die
would you stay and hold my hand
or would you sit and watch me cry

If i told you i was moving
and i only had just one day
would you want to come with me
or would you walk away

I wish i knew the answers
but then i'd be afraid to know
if you were to stay
or if you were to go



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on May. 11 2009 at 12:05 am
Savanah_banana15 BRONZE, Sierra Vista, Arizona
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I LOVEE IT!!!

on May. 9 2009 at 3:32 pm
Grayson Tate SILVER, Colorado Springs, Colorado
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great poem. especially like the anaphora in the first four stanzas.