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As the World spins
On its invisible thread
Slowly
And yet so fast
At times it seems so thin
As if to snap
With the weight of our responsibility.

So delicate
The balance
Between the Sun and Moon
In the sky sometimes
They coexist
But never, it seems
At night.

At night
Stargazing
Contemplating life elsewhere
But no one ever thinks
To gaze upon
The Daytime sky
For fear of blinding light.





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TinyDancer said...
Nov. 25, 2009 at 6:33 pm
Good job +++Zero+++
I do believe, as well, that we are afraid to glimpse the fragility, and nonexistence of our life forms on this planet we call home
check out my work if you'd like :)
 
dreamer_believer said...
Oct. 9, 2009 at 10:58 am
wow this is great!! :) the rhythm is sooo good and the meaning is sooo deep! :) wow, it's just amazing! would you mind checking out 2 of my new pieces (eternity and when the darkenss comes)? i would really love to get your feedback! :) and once again, great job on your work!
 
Electricity This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 7, 2009 at 3:41 pm
It's as if you are HIM, and the world is IT, and you palm read it's pain and beauty. Great job, it's as if you is seeing the world from a wise man's eyes.
 
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