Mama Said, MAG

April 16, 2009
By Menie7 GOLD, Toa Alta, Other
Menie7 GOLD, Toa Alta, Other
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Mama said,
sweetheart, love wholeheartedly,
and hold on 'til death.
Then Mama said,
darling, we're all victims,
in my life love led.
After Mama said,
honey, learn to forgive love,
mine fled.
And in the end Mama said,
love, love don't matter.
But, Mama,
yes, it did.
It did.



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LemonQuiche said...
on Dec. 7 2009 at 6:28 am
This was really pretty. It has a really nice balance... a good voice, I guess.

I really liked it.

Katie.T. GOLD said...
on Nov. 30 2009 at 5:38 pm
Katie.T. GOLD, Chaptico, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
"Why go for a 100%, when with a little more, you can have 110%." -KT

Beautiful piece. I am truely in love with this piece of writing.

Menie7 GOLD said...
on Nov. 30 2009 at 12:10 pm
Menie7 GOLD, Toa Alta, Other
10 articles 4 photos 3 comments
Thank you very much!!. That's what I hope it would convey to readers :D

on Jul. 25 2009 at 5:34 pm
wombatz-rule GOLD, Montrose, Minnesota
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Holy cow, you are a WRITER! This poem has a lovely feel to it, like a comfy old poem written as a dialogue between a young adult and their mother. In the beginning, it feels as though the person is younger and listening to their mother's advice about love. Then, later on, at the end of the poem, it feels as though the person has grown up some and lived life for themselves, and now has a different opinion. Anyways, amazing work.

on Jul. 2 2009 at 12:21 am
TheCinders PLATINUM, Kentwood, Michigan
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Wow, that's amazing. I like how it kind of appears that this person's mother is having an inner conflict with love.

-Bria


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