Everything I feel

April 22, 2009
By brewer BRONZE, Zanesville, Ohio
brewer BRONZE, Zanesville, Ohio
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As I watch my life pass me by, everytime I say goodbye to this life I leave behind, wondering why everything was just a lie.
Everything I've ever known, everyone I once knew has left me here alone.
As I lay here on the ground, just wishing someone would save me now.
Can you hear me now, screaming on the ground.
I lost the people I loved.
I feel alone.
There's no one for me,
No one good enough.
Can't let go of the past.
Can't let him go,
All I did was love him so.
It's not right to just let him walk out of my life.
I've tired and tried.
I have to let go and he will never know.

The author's comments:
This is how I have always felt.
I've just felt so depressed with many different reasons why.
I've felt so lost and alone for so long.

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This article has 2 comments.

on May. 6 2009 at 2:26 am
blackamethyst GOLD, Centerville, Ohio
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amazing poem. thanks for writing it i really liked it.

on May. 5 2009 at 9:45 pm
Ineedthesuntorise BRONZE, Maple Grove, Minnesota
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I really really love this poem!! it clearly shows raw and pure emotions. And dont worry, your not alone. I am actually depressed too and have felt this way for a very long time too. If you wanna talk, I am here. Also check out my poems, they might express some feelings that you have felt. But anyway this poem is brilliant!!


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