Like Rain

April 14, 2009
By xxalyxallurexx GOLD, Albrightsvill, Pennsylvania
xxalyxallurexx GOLD, Albrightsvill, Pennsylvania
14 articles 6 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
you have nothing tho fear but fear itself


The days go by
and i stand still
how did i get here?
the rain is falling and its in for the kill

Love falls like rain
For everyone but me
I don’t know why
I don’t know how
I ended up this way

Love falls like rain
And I feel the pain
Setting in again
Why am I like this?
Why cant I feel the rain?
it seeps threw my body
but yet my heart it still remains without feeling

love falls like rain
for everyone but me
i feel the pain
and yet it seems to me
that i will linger without a beat

why wont it fall for me?
is it not meant to be?
did i do something wrong?
why wont it rain down for me?

love may fall like rain
for everyone but me
but thats it just for now
and someday i'll be free
someday i'll forget my pain
and the rain
the rain
will rain down for me


The author's comments:
i love this poem becacuse it may not be the best but it started out as mee just randomly singing during a rain storm though i was only joking around i ran and got a pen and paper and for some reason loved this so i decided to make it into poetry
i know its not that good but i guess thats just my opinion
i dont really care bout other peopples opinions but i dont mind hearing them so please comment and tell me what you think.
thanks
-alyssa garcet

Similar Articles

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 2 comments.


on Sep. 17 2009 at 10:38 am
xxalyxallurexx GOLD, Albrightsvill, Pennsylvania
14 articles 6 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
you have nothing tho fear but fear itself

thanks this was one of my least favorites but it came to mind so i love it. thanks for the feedback read and comment some ore i'd rele like that

v1134 said...
on Sep. 12 2009 at 2:42 pm
I really life your poetry!!


SciArc

MacMillan Books

Aspiring Writer? Take Our Online Course!