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Brownie

April 24, 2009
By Jennifer Staeglich BRONZE, Rockford, Michigan
Jennifer Staeglich BRONZE, Rockford, Michigan
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Brownie is furry
With brown and white hair.
She is very loving,
And will have fun curling up with you.
Even though she bites,
She is always there for you.
She is very talkative
Which can get annoying.
But I can’t imagine life
Without her here by my side.
Brownie loves food
And eats a lot of carrots.
She needs a lot of care
And wants a lot of attention.
And I’ll be happy to give it to her
Anytime she wants it!


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abby said...
on May. 20 2009 at 2:45 pm
hey jennifer this poem is really awesome ☺☻

peacelove said...
on May. 5 2009 at 4:46 pm
I love your poem it is so CUTE AND FANTABULOUS!!! LOL

on May. 5 2009 at 4:42 pm
Jennifer Staeglich BRONZE, Rockford, Michigan
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good job i think Nothing is wrong with it because it is a free verse poem

on Apr. 30 2009 at 11:46 pm
i like it is it sopposed to ryhm?? if it is then work on it but if not love it!!!

CheerJen77 said...
on Apr. 30 2009 at 11:33 pm
I think u love your guinea pig very much