When You Left Me

April 23, 2009
By KarreraRadford GOLD, Lawrence, Kansas
KarreraRadford GOLD, Lawrence, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
"When Life says ' Give up',
Hope wispers ' Try one more time'"


You said yes when I asked if you wanted to go out some time.
You said yes when I asked for my first hug from you.
You were more than willing to take my first kiss,
But when it was my turn to say no,
you got mad, you said you would never hurt me,
That I would be safe.


Now I'm on my bed crying because
you left without a Good-Bye.
My friends try to comfert me,
But I think I'm still in shock,
Because you said I would be safe,
You wouldnt hurt me.


So where are you when I need you most?


The author's comments:
This is a poem about the guy I had a really big crush on and he broke my heart in 2....:D

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on May. 7 2009 at 4:53 pm
KarreraRadford GOLD, Lawrence, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
"When Life says ' Give up',
Hope wispers ' Try one more time'"

based on a true story




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