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I hear America Fighting

April 20, 2009
By elizabeth wasek BRONZE, Valley Stream, New York
elizabeth wasek BRONZE, Valley Stream, New York
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I hear America fighting,People yelling and scream
These Americans yelling at other Americans
Teenagers fighting in the cold streets
I hear employers firing their employees
I see parents fighting with their kids
Many children wanna run away from this fighting
There is fighting all over the place
No one can hide from the fighting
Its broadcasr on the News and internet
There is no way of stopping it!
So America please stop fighting.

The author's comments:
This was writing in my 11 grade english class.

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on Apr. 27 2009 at 3:05 am
KICK3593 PLATINUM, Roslyn Heights, New York
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"You're not killing the right guy" "That's so. Who gave you orders? I'll go after him. He's the one to kill" "You're wrong. He got his orders from the bank. The bank told him, 'Clear these people out or it's your job.'" "Well, there's a president of the bank. There's a board of directors. I'll fill up the magazine of the rifle and go into the back" "Fellow was telling me the bank gets orders from the East. The orders were, 'Make the land show profit of we'll close you up.'" "But where does it stop? Who can we shoot?"



That's from the Grapes of Wrath, and I know that these words have been typed a few many a time. And now here's another one. But where's the perspecive coming from? How many different people's views are converging and intersecting at large angles? Just as an interpretation has to cover the whole poem, a poem has to cover a whole interpretation of the world, full and fierce. Yours is meek...



I'm a tough critic, so you'll forgive me for being rough.