April 20, 2009
By Alexis Wigfall SILVER, Buckeye, Arizona
Alexis Wigfall SILVER, Buckeye, Arizona
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You played me bad o ever so bad
when you told me there was someone else i was ever so mad
We had many laughters and a lot of drama too but what you didn't know was that my dream was to be with you, you tell me I am different than any other girl and I tell you you are my pride actually my world
then you say you feel the same way towards me as I feel towards you but the more you hurt me I don't think it's true you made me cry and laugh at the same time but the way you played me should be a crime.

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on Apr. 28 2009 at 1:16 pm
MorningStar15 DIAMOND, Orange, Vermont
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i liked it too tho i agree with jennnnnnn, but it is 100% the truth it should be...

on Apr. 27 2009 at 3:20 am
jennnnnnn BRONZE, Irvine, California
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i like your poem,

i think it could be a lot better with better spacing and word choice,

but its decent (:

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