The True Teenage Girl

April 18, 2009
By Batwoman GOLD, Middlebury, Indiana
Batwoman GOLD, Middlebury, Indiana
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These feelings inside she can no longer take,
All she wants to do is rip apart her gate.
And unleash every feeling she's keep locked up inside,
To be the good little girl her life was a lie.
The hatred in her eyes boils over in a flood,
Drowning the one's she hates in a tidal pool of mud.
She growing stronger in her calmness maybe there's hope yet,
But trust me these feelings she'll never forget.



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on May. 13 2009 at 11:41 pm
Caligirl SILVER, Denver, Colorado
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This one is my favorite :) it reminds me of highschool

Batwoman GOLD said...
on Apr. 30 2009 at 1:24 am
Batwoman GOLD, Middlebury, Indiana
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Thanks for your input...and no problem I love your poetry Lily

Chuck said...
on Apr. 29 2009 at 11:44 am
That was an intense poem! I hope all those feelings don't all come out all at once!

on Apr. 28 2009 at 10:45 pm
MysteriousLily93 BRONZE, Edison, New Jersey
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POWERFUL!!! Love It. *And thanks for commenting on my peom:)*


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