The True Teenage Girl

April 18, 2009
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These feelings inside she can no longer take,
All she wants to do is rip apart her gate.
And unleash every feeling she's keep locked up inside,
To be the good little girl her life was a lie.
The hatred in her eyes boils over in a flood,
Drowning the one's she hates in a tidal pool of mud.
She growing stronger in her calmness maybe there's hope yet,
But trust me these feelings she'll never forget.

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Caligirl This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 13, 2009 at 11:41 pm
This one is my favorite :) it reminds me of highschool
Batwoman said...
Apr. 30, 2009 at 1:24 am
Thanks for your input...and no problem I love your poetry Lily
Chuck said...
Apr. 29, 2009 at 11:44 am
That was an intense poem! I hope all those feelings don't all come out all at once!
MysteriousLily93 said...
Apr. 28, 2009 at 10:45 pm
POWERFUL!!! Love It. *And thanks for commenting on my peom:)*
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