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Thoughts Of Him

Its 1 a.m.
I should go to bed.
but my world is spinning.
with all these thoughts in my head,

He is so strong,
Yet so weak,
I know he needs scream,
He needs to speak,

I try to help,
But he pushes me away,
I will take his pain,
If God would take his away,

He is just like me,
Two years ago,
Lost in grief,
With no where to go,

I want him to laugh,
I need him to smile,
Even though i know,
Coping takes awhile,

I try to help,
But he pushes me away,
Still i linger near the dark,
Pushing the sunlight his way,

Its 1 a.m.
I should go to bed.
But my world is spinning.
With him in my head,





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unearthlyhaphazard said...
Aug. 21, 2009 at 1:30 pm
What a great poem! I agree with EdytD, the rhyming was excellently done. Keep writing!
 
EdytD said...
Apr. 26, 2009 at 5:49 pm
Neat! I especially like the rhyming - I've never been able to pull that off. Whenever I rhyme, it comes out forced and awkward, but your poem flows.
Good job!

I'd love if you looked at my poetry. Thanks! :D
 
:PBUBBLES:P said...
Apr. 25, 2009 at 2:07 pm
Amazing poem!! It flows so well, and everything is just perfect!!
 
Dani P. said...
Apr. 25, 2009 at 3:25 am
this is amazing.
keep writing.
you have some serious talent.
 
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