A Girl lost

I can see a girl
in this big world
shes scared and hiding
other people gliding
shes stuck in her home
theres no one but alone
she sees what you see
but people dont believe
so shes on her own
in her small dirty home
theres no one on her side
she wishes she could die
she really wants to leave
when she does, she wouldnt breathe
she wants to ask god
but she think its too odd
now god answers "count to three, you'll be free, and all your fears will disappear."
she counted "one, i won, two, i'll sue, three i'm free and all my fears had disappeared."
now nothing bad happened
shes free and laughing





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EdytD said...
Apr. 23, 2009 at 9:30 pm
I really liked the beginning, but I didn't really get the end. Is she talking to god, or did you mean for her to be talking to herself, so to speak?
 
Kumang replied...
Sept. 19, 2009 at 5:11 am
umm she was talkin to herself.. lol
 
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