Yes.

April 10, 2009
By 12345 BRONZE, Strafford, New Hampshire
12345 BRONZE, Strafford, New Hampshire
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We live the same life,
But do you live mine?
I look at you,
Do you look at me?
I can’t tell.


We walk the same path,
But is yours as crooked?
I reach out to you,
Is that you, there?
I don’t know.


We see each other,
But do you see me?
I love you,
Do you feel the same?
Do you?


We stand side by side,
But are you there?
You fill my thoughts,
Do I yours?
Tell me.













Yes.



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on Aug. 6 2009 at 2:26 am
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

great job. i think all of us sometimes have similiar thoughts and you did a great job putting this into a poem. excellent :) please keep writing cuz you have a true talent! also check out some of my work and comment :)


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