April 10, 2009
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We live the same life,
But do you live mine?
I look at you,
Do you look at me?
I can’t tell.

We walk the same path,
But is yours as crooked?
I reach out to you,
Is that you, there?
I don’t know.

We see each other,
But do you see me?
I love you,
Do you feel the same?
Do you?

We stand side by side,
But are you there?
You fill my thoughts,
Do I yours?
Tell me.


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dreamer_believer said...
Aug. 6, 2009 at 2:26 am
great job. i think all of us sometimes have similiar thoughts and you did a great job putting this into a poem. excellent :) please keep writing cuz you have a true talent! also check out some of my work and comment :)
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