April 7, 2009
By Quinney GOLD, Rantoul, Illinois
Quinney GOLD, Rantoul, Illinois
17 articles 2 photos 9 comments

Looking at each person
and the burdens they bare
no one seems to realize
or else they just don't care
everyone has to deal with
some kind of pain
and will always carry
the bruises of what it cost
no matter what it is
a part of their heart
will be forever lost
from this point on
when you recognize
the suffering of another
try to always help them as though
they were your sister or brother

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Quinney GOLD said...
on May. 7 2010 at 8:28 am
Quinney GOLD, Rantoul, Illinois
17 articles 2 photos 9 comments
I hope you have a brother or sister as well...to help you through all that life throws at you :)

on Mar. 2 2010 at 6:01 pm
SarClark BRONZE, NC, Connecticut
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Wow, this is really cool! I agree with Vmusic... totally! Love it!

on Apr. 21 2009 at 3:48 am
GreyEyesBlueHair GOLD, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"Develop interest in life as you see it; in people, things, literature, music - the world is so rich, simply throbbing with rich treasures, beautiful souls and interesting people. Forget yourself." Henry Miller

Awww! I love your poem! That's so sweet and true! We should help people more, but sadly most issues get ignored.... I hope you have a sister or brother there for you if you ever feel one of those burdens or if your carryig one right now. :) *Hugs* Keep writing! Your work gives great advice!


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