Never Read a Ransom Note

January 11, 2011
By Annabel1379 BRONZE, Evanston, Illinois
Annabel1379 BRONZE, Evanston, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
“Fashion fades, only style remains the same.” -Coco Chanel
“In order to be irreplaceable one must always be different.” -Coco Chanel


Summary:

When Sierra finds a ransom note in her best friend Tammy's room, and Tammy nowhere to be found, she doesn't know what to think. She tries talking to her mom about it, but when she doesn't gain any advice she would actually use, she goes to her sister. And SHE couldn't care less. So Sierra goes through the rest of the weekend wondering what she'll find on Monday. And she doesn't like what she finds.
Sierra finds a messed up Tammy, who is messed up in more ways than one. Tammy is muttering quietly to herself, and Sierra notices some red marks on her neck.
At lunch, Sierra is even more confused. When she asks her what happened, Tammy tells her to leave her alone; to stop bothering her. Tammy doesn't want her best friend near her. So Sierra is forced to figure it out for herself. And she finds some things she doesn't want to find...

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on Sep. 26 2012 at 8:53 pm
Freckles3 BRONZE, ------------, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"The universe is not only queerer than we suppose; it is queerer than we can suppose."
~J.B.S. Haldane

Everything was really good, even the end. I liked the different twists in the plot. It might help to explain the Agency a little more... I felt as lost as Sierra! It's a really good story, though. 

whiterose GOLD said...
on Apr. 22 2012 at 7:18 pm
whiterose GOLD, Independence, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
The future lies before you, like a field of fallen snow; be careful how you tread it, for every step will show.

I think that this story goes to fast, the characters seem like they have no emotion.  It's also confusing.  I'm sorry for seeming rude but I'm just sharing my honest opinion.

happy99 said...
on Oct. 7 2011 at 1:08 pm
Amazing story!!! very interesting..

ljjjjjjjj said...
on Oct. 7 2011 at 9:33 am
pretty good

on Sep. 15 2011 at 11:59 am
Rocinante SILVER, Wexford, Pennsylvania
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I agree, I did get a tad confused at the end but the beginning was good

.Izzy. BRONZE said...
on Jun. 29 2011 at 10:36 am
.Izzy. BRONZE, Broadview Heights, Ohio
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You held my interest the entire way through. I'm a bit confused about the agency though, I wish that the last chapter was a bit longer. But I like how she meets Tammy at the end. Keep writing!

on Jun. 22 2011 at 6:50 pm
SarcasticPersonInTraining BRONZE, Woodbury, Minnesota
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VERY interesting concept and overall kept me really interested in the story! the end was slightly rushed and confusing. maybe a few more descriptions would help? but pretty good! Please check out my story Last Note and comment adn rate please id love to hear your feedback! :)

on Jun. 21 2011 at 8:48 am
writerthinkerdreamer BRONZE, Narnia, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"Just keep swimming," ~Dory, Finding Nemo

nice job : )

on Jun. 17 2011 at 1:20 pm
Annabel1379 BRONZE, Evanston, Illinois
2 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
“Fashion fades, only style remains the same.” -Coco Chanel
“In order to be irreplaceable one must always be different.” -Coco Chanel

thanks!!!!

on Jun. 6 2011 at 10:20 pm
KristySparklez BRONZE, Sterling, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
Time only numbs all pain, it does not heal the wounds created by, nor does it heal the pain

i really like this!!! are you going to post more? i really hope so!!!


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