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In My Mind (full)

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Bayleigh P.
In My Mind (full)
Summary: I am different. And not just the kind of different like freakishly tall. I can do things no other human being can do. I can read minds. I am a mind reader.





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NataleeIreneThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 24, 2013 at 12:00 pm:
I like this; great transition from short story to novel. Can't wait to see new chapter. One piece of criticism though: when the POV changes, make it evident. Maybe you could put a heading called "Sailor" when she is telling the story and vice versa when John is telling the story.
 
Bayleigh_love replied...
Jul. 24, 2013 at 10:03 pm :
Yeah I tried to do that with the POV's by stating the other's names, but I guess it didn't work haha. I am working on the chapter and I am still trying to figure out what to do next!
 
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