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YellowJacket

Delta365
YellowJacket
Summary: A man who happens to deal with a bit of anger. Anger is only evident if provoked as such.

He ends up going through a tragic experience, and goes a bit mad afterwards and takes out his revenge.

Ends up like most tragic stories.





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Authorgal98 said...
Jul. 29, 2011 at 8:22 pm
So sad! Especially how they brainwash him into fighting on their side. I mean, they killed his future wife! I love it, though. You have a lot of talent and creativity! Keep it up!
 
Brayaparis said...
Jun. 22, 2011 at 7:03 pm
wow, you really have talent(:
I am trying to find the coarge to put my stuff up. Reading yours inspired me thanks!
 
leaf44 said...
May 19, 2011 at 3:07 pm
That was great!  Really interesting and fast paced, although it was a little confusing at times.  You might want to add a little more about his fiance too.
 
Delta365 replied...
May 27, 2011 at 4:49 pm
ya, that'd probably help. Think i should add more to the end?
 
leaf44 replied...
May 30, 2011 at 4:06 pm
No, I like the ending.  It's kinda sad, but it's good.
 

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