YellowJacket

May 16, 2011
By Delta365 BRONZE, Chadwick, Missouri
Delta365 BRONZE, Chadwick, Missouri
1 article 0 photos 10 comments

Summary:

A man who happens to deal with a bit of anger. Anger is only evident if provoked as such.

He ends up going through a tragic experience, and goes a bit mad afterwards and takes out his revenge.

Ends up like most tragic stories.


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YellowJacket


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on Jul. 29 2011 at 8:22 pm
Authorgal98 GOLD, Frankort, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"Let your mind sart a journey through a strange new world..."

So sad! Especially how they brainwash him into fighting on their side. I mean, they killed his future wife! I love it, though. You have a lot of talent and creativity! Keep it up!

on Jun. 22 2011 at 7:03 pm
Brayaparis BRONZE, Amboy, Washington
3 articles 1 photo 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is not measured my the breaths we take but, by the moments that take our breath away.

wow, you really have talent(:
I am trying to find the coarge to put my stuff up. Reading yours inspired me thanks!

on May. 30 2011 at 4:06 pm
leaf44 PLATINUM, Rehoboth, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"Truth is stranger than fiction because fiction has to make sense."
"Be careful, or you'll end up in my novel."

No, I like the ending.  It's kinda sad, but it's good.

on May. 27 2011 at 4:49 pm
Delta365 BRONZE, Chadwick, Missouri
1 article 0 photos 10 comments
ya, that'd probably help. Think i should add more to the end?

on May. 19 2011 at 3:07 pm
leaf44 PLATINUM, Rehoboth, Massachusetts
20 articles 0 photos 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Truth is stranger than fiction because fiction has to make sense."
"Be careful, or you'll end up in my novel."

That was great!  Really interesting and fast paced, although it was a little confusing at times.  You might want to add a little more about his fiance too.




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