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Oorah_Alchemist
Number 72
Summary: Junia awakens to a hard rough planet where survival is for the fittest which she is not in. How to survive on a planet where every single person or number as they call it is after you for a reward? What number was she exactly? And who is that cute healer who keeps nagging at the back of her mind and what's his number?





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Alfee said...
Jun. 16, 2011 at 11:32 am
Great story :) many grammar/spelling errors, but they're overlook-able. PLEASE continue? :D
 
Medina D. said...
Mar. 22, 2011 at 2:56 pm

i cant believe no one gave you even a snip of a comment on this story!! :O

i don't mean to be overcritical, or anything like that, but i spotted MANY spelling and grammar mistakes throughout the story. And you didn't paragraph your chapters (until chapter 3--------And I'm proud of you for that) I'm not trying to be snobby about it, but I'm suggesting that if you fix these mistakes, the story will be less confusing.

CHAPTER 4 WAS PERFECT. Paragraphed, and i only spotted 1 tiny sp... (more »)

 
Oorah_Alchemist replied...
Mar. 22, 2011 at 3:38 pm
Thanks :D I'll deffinatly fix up those mistakes. Thank you for reading/ commenting too. I appreciate the tips too. ;D
 

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