Pure of Heart

November 28, 2013
By laughterpalace, Ault, Colorado
laughterpalace, Ault, Colorado
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Summary:

Nathan Myer doesn't know what to expect from moving to a decrepit old house in a small town, besides that his all his friends are miles away and his days will be spent in misery. But when an accident in the woods hurls him into a life of the unreal, he's got bigger things to worry about than his social life.


Emma K.

Pure of Heart


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on Dec. 9 2013 at 7:59 pm
laughterpalace, Ault, Colorado
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Thanks for the feedback! I know I need to start editting soon, but I got caught up in other projects when I finished. I'll post more :)

on Dec. 9 2013 at 6:02 pm
MissCadabby BRONZE, Flemington, New Jersey
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Seems interesting so far, but the sentences need to be varied more. A good rule of thumb is to avoid starting two sentences in a row with the same word. Can't wait to read more.




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