22 Places

May 22, 2012
By Sharon.Sturnfield GOLD, Hoffman Estates, Illinois
Sharon.Sturnfield GOLD, Hoffman Estates, Illinois
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Summary:

Addie and John are crazy about eachother, but life is even crazier. Their argument takes us from their history to their present to a question of what reality really is.


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22 Places


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on May. 26 2012 at 1:53 pm
Sharon.Sturnfield GOLD, Hoffman Estates, Illinois
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Thanks! I'm flattered that you liked it so much. :) I've posted some more of my work but it's being processed right now. And yeah, I tried to make the shifts from past to present more obvious but I felt like it hurt the story, so I just left it. And again, thank you! :)

on May. 26 2012 at 5:01 am
nemish23 BRONZE, Sydney, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"The happiest people don't necessarily have the best of everything;
They just make the most of everything they have."

"Today is life. The only life we're sure of. Make the most of today." -CSI:NY

I also meant to mention how much I love the changes between the present and the past. It took me a while to get what was happening but once I did, it was so good! It was a really clever idea so well done!

on May. 26 2012 at 5:00 am
nemish23 BRONZE, Sydney, Other
2 articles 0 photos 110 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The happiest people don't necessarily have the best of everything;
They just make the most of everything they have."

"Today is life. The only life we're sure of. Make the most of today." -CSI:NY

That was possibly the sweetest thing I've every read in my life!

It was so good. I nearly started crying towards the end (I'm a pathetically emotional person sometimes).

Like John said, there aren't many words to describe how great your book was. Your descriptions were fabulous and your style of writing in just awesome!

Please keep writing, cause I'd love to read more stuff you write!

<3



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