Making You Mine...

March 22, 2012
By Renegade9891 BRONZE, Skipton, Other
Renegade9891 BRONZE, Skipton, Other
1 article 0 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Keep calm and use your powers of reason."
"Get bored and shoot the wall."
"Ideas are like buses, they never come when you need them to."


Summary:

The ultimate combination of love, loss and Gothic betrayal. What happens when your taken away and forced into a competition. The winner will marry the vampire prince and everyone else - will die. Now I'm forced to fight against my best friend for a love I don't want but a life I want to keep.
He talked to me the prince and stared into my eyes.
"I could enlighten you with the promise I would die for you but no..." He paused. "I would kill for you and I am making you mine..."


Patch C.

Making You Mine...


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on Nov. 26 2017 at 12:10 pm
JustExisting BRONZE, Franklinville, New Jersey
2 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"I am not a princess, I don't need saving. I am a queen, I got this shit handled."

please write moreeeeeeeeeeee

on Oct. 28 2016 at 3:10 pm
candyfromhawaii, Columbus, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
pepeto

yes moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee please

EstherC said...
on May. 19 2015 at 7:56 pm
EstherC, Rosharon, Texas
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I love this! You haveee to continue it.

on May. 19 2015 at 2:03 pm
Amazing... You have NO choice, but to finish... PLEASE!!!

on Jul. 11 2014 at 3:31 pm
Cheshirekat SILVER, Boise, Idaho
5 articles 0 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
“A friend might well be reckoned the masterpiece of nature.” - Ralph Waldo Emerson
"Oh you can't avoid that; we're all mad here." - The Cheshire Cat

Wow you have to finish this!

on Jul. 11 2014 at 3:02 pm
Cheshirekat SILVER, Boise, Idaho
5 articles 0 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
“A friend might well be reckoned the masterpiece of nature.” - Ralph Waldo Emerson
"Oh you can't avoid that; we're all mad here." - The Cheshire Cat

The irony of this statment is killing me..

on Apr. 28 2014 at 8:51 am
TheMuseEuterpe GOLD, Lafayette, Indiana
10 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
Writing is my oxygen. Music is my carbon dioxide. ~Jessica Bell

You should right more, I really can't wait to see where this goes.

on Feb. 11 2014 at 5:49 pm
LostInStereo PLATINUM, Phoenixville, Pennsylvania
26 articles 3 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
Friends are the family you choose.

The storyline is unique, which makes the story very entertaining. However, I agree with the other commenters when they say to check your grammar. Also, be sure to stay in the same tense throughout the entire story. I do the same thing when I write. I begin writing in past or present, and end up in the other. It helps immensely with the flow of the story if you are sure to stay in a single one. Also, it doesn't make sense if the story is in present tense one sentence, and past in the next. Good job, though! It really is a great idea P.s. I hope I helped somewhat :)

on Jan. 20 2014 at 6:43 pm
MissyStokes BRONZE, VIENNA, Virginia
4 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
Fear is like happiness but the smile is wider

*grammar, also please ignore the irony of these comments

on Jan. 20 2014 at 6:41 pm
MissyStokes BRONZE, VIENNA, Virginia
4 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
Fear is like happiness but the smile is wider

uniqueish idea, please continue and please check your grammer.

on Apr. 9 2013 at 9:15 am
FallenAngel170198 GOLD, Bundaberg, Other
13 articles 0 photos 47 comments
Write more please? :D this is awesome

Madcap_Mouse said...
on Nov. 28 2012 at 11:46 am
Madcap_Mouse, Eden Prairie, Minnesota
0 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
All Of Us Are In The Gutter But Some Of Us Are Looking Up At The Stars.


















~Oscar Wilde

this was realy good but id go through it againg and cheak your spelling and gramar.

RachelB2 said...
on Mar. 26 2012 at 7:33 am
RachelB2, Skipton, North Yorkshire, Arizona
0 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
The world is your oyster

"i kicked and trashed"

no, you didn't trash, you thrashed


RachelB2 said...
on Mar. 26 2012 at 7:29 am
RachelB2, Skipton, North Yorkshire, Arizona
0 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
The world is your oyster

Hey Rachel here

great book and i actually think that it wasn't just cjrlotte using my accoung which she made for me...


FULLSTOP GOLD said...
on Mar. 26 2012 at 5:09 am
FULLSTOP GOLD, Skipton, North Yorkshire, Other
13 articles 7 photos 103 comments

Favorite Quote:
forever and ever and ever and ever will never be enough

k btw Lou Lou i can't find ur orum. wassitcalled?

on Mar. 26 2012 at 4:52 am
Renegade9891 BRONZE, Skipton, Other
1 article 0 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Keep calm and use your powers of reason."
"Get bored and shoot the wall."
"Ideas are like buses, they never come when you need them to."

kk, I'm a looking.

FULLSTOP GOLD said...
on Mar. 26 2012 at 4:26 am
FULLSTOP GOLD, Skipton, North Yorkshire, Other
13 articles 7 photos 103 comments

Favorite Quote:
forever and ever and ever and ever will never be enough

actually, can you look at some of my work? 

FULLSTOP GOLD said...
on Mar. 26 2012 at 4:25 am
FULLSTOP GOLD, Skipton, North Yorkshire, Other
13 articles 7 photos 103 comments

Favorite Quote:
forever and ever and ever and ever will never be enough

HI!!! annoying psycho here...

OKAY...

a) this is an AMMAZING BOOK

b) whilst it deserves comments, try this: comment on other people's work, and ask them to look at yours when they do. It works


on Mar. 26 2012 at 3:48 am
Renegade9891 BRONZE, Skipton, Other
1 article 0 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Keep calm and use your powers of reason."
"Get bored and shoot the wall."
"Ideas are like buses, they never come when you need them to."

Hello, everyone. 

I would really appreciate it if you could all vote and comment. I would love comments even if they are negative. I, as a writer, still have LOADS to learn.

Thank you,



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