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love through time

Bailey D.
love through time
Summary: belle roger the same characters thorugh out three diffrent time periods love never changes.





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NeVassa said...
Jan. 14, 2012 at 4:43 pm
wow... this is so good!
 
SarasotaWonder said...
Jan. 14, 2012 at 4:37 pm
Hey, great job with this! I really enjoyed the plot line and the dillemas, and thought you really excelled at portraying the historical aspect of this. There were just a few things I would work on: 1)Pa vs. Father and Ma. vs. Mother....which one does the main character use? You will want to keep it consistent. 2)Also, it read a tad like an article or journal in a newpaper....try adding more emotion and some more description. This will lengthen it out as well as add more intensity to the novel. ... (more »)
 
WrittenEmotions said...
Jan. 13, 2012 at 6:18 pm
Wow I love this!(: great!
 

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