love through time

December 23, 2011
By vetlover21 SILVER, Bronx, New York
vetlover21 SILVER, Bronx, New York
6 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"changeing for pople doesn\\\'t make you friends for life, staying yourslef does."


belle roger the same characters thorugh out three diffrent time periods love never changes.

Bailey D.

love through time

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This book has 3 comments.

NeVassa GOLD said...
on Jan. 14 2012 at 4:43 pm
NeVassa GOLD, Ft. Belvoir, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
Oh god I was a stupid twelve year old

wow... this is so good!

on Jan. 14 2012 at 4:37 pm
SarasotaWonder BRONZE, Cumberland, Maine
1 article 0 photos 61 comments
Hey, great job with this! I really enjoyed the plot line and the dillemas, and thought you really excelled at portraying the historical aspect of this. There were just a few things I would work on: 1)Pa vs. Father and Ma. vs. Mother....which one does the main character use? You will want to keep it consistent. 2)Also, it read a tad like an article or journal in a newpaper....try adding more emotion and some more description. This will lengthen it out as well as add more intensity to the novel. 3) You did better with this towards the end, but add more dialouge in the begining. It will let the reader know more about the main character, as well as draw out the rather long plot. Overal, great work! I hope my comment helped :)

on Jan. 13 2012 at 6:18 pm
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
32 articles 0 photos 209 comments

Favorite Quote:
The only people who don't get anywhere are the people who don't dream of a better place for themselves...

Wow I love this!(: great!

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