The Night that Changed it All

July 16, 2011
By Jules2012 BRONZE, Rush City, Minnesota
Jules2012 BRONZE, Rush City, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes glass glitters more than gold, because glass has more to prove."


Summary:

Adelaide, is the princess of France. Her and her friend, Lilian, go out to a masked ball. They both meet guys at the party. A few critical details about Adelaide and Leon(her guy)'s lives fail to become known to each other. Will they ever meet again? Will they be able to face the problems?


Julia W.

The Night that Changed it All


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greatwriter said...
on Feb. 12 2013 at 2:14 pm
greatwriter, Chicago, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Why fit in when you were born to STAND OUT.

Sorry but I just noticed something else: it's not "pas" but "Non" (to refuse a dance). Other than that I really do like your story

greatwriter said...
on Feb. 12 2013 at 2:05 pm
greatwriter, Chicago, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Why fit in when you were born to STAND OUT.

Hi, I just wanted to point out that your French is not correct. It should be: ¹ “Vous parlez englais?” I asked them.
² “Oui.”
³ “Ca vous dérange si nous parlons anglais? Mon ami ne sait pas parler français.” I asked them.
“Sure.” They we chuckling as they answered.
“Thank you.” I replied.

¹ “Do you guys speak English?”
² “Yes.”
³ “Do you mind if we speak English? My friend can't speak French.”   I don't mean to be stuckup or mean it just gets on my nerves when people speak/write French wrong (I'm part French).


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