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Julia W.
The Night that Changed it All
Summary: Adelaide, is the princess of France. Her and her friend, Lilian, go out to a masked ball. They both meet guys at the party. A few critical details about Adelaide and Leon(her guy)'s lives fail to become known to each other. Will they ever meet again? Will they be able to face the problems?

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greatwriterThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 12 at 2:14 pm:
Sorry but I just noticed something else: it's not "pas" but "Non" (to refuse a dance). Other than that I really do like your story
 
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Feb. 12 at 2:05 pm:
Hi, I just wanted to point out that your French is not correct. It should be: ¹ “Vous parlez englais?” I asked them.
² “Oui.”
³ “Ca vous dérange si nous parlons anglais? Mon ami ne sait pas parler français.” I asked them.
“Sure.” They we chuckling as they answered.
“Thank you.” I replied.

¹ “Do you guys speak English?”
² “Yes.”more »)
 
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