Troubled Love

June 2, 2011
By MeIsMe18, Roswell, New Mexico
MeIsMe18, Roswell, New Mexico
0 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
When one door of happiness closes, another opens; But often we look so long at the closed door that we do not see the one that has been opened for us.


Summary:

Avery loves her sweet and nice Boyfriend Blake but she soon finds out that he has not told her the most important thing in his life. She will be faced with a decision that will either Kill her beloved Blake or Save him forever.


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Troubled Love


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on Mar. 12 2012 at 5:15 pm
SilverLuna SILVER, _________, Washington
8 articles 0 photos 230 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Come fairies take me out of this dull world, for I would ride with you upon the wind and dance upon the mountains like a flame.".... W.B. Yeats.
"Flying is learning how to throw yourself at the ground and miss." - Douglas Adams

This is nice and intriguing! I love it! You have a few grammatical errors though! There was a line where you mixed up which tense you were speaking in, arrangment of words and there/their confusion. BUT those are small problems! Great job! Can't wait for more!(:

on Jan. 9 2012 at 12:26 pm
JerseyGrl-008 BRONZE, Yuma, Arizona
1 article 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Live long and prosper":p

more please!!!! :)

on Dec. 20 2011 at 5:21 pm
Bookworm1998 GOLD, Brampton, Other
17 articles 2 photos 118 comments

Favorite Quote:
Preserve your memories, keep them well; what you forget, you can never retell.

this is a great book!

on Dec. 20 2011 at 1:10 pm
ClaraRose SILVER, Glasgow, Other
7 articles 0 photos 108 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's not what we are born, but what we grow to be."

"you think that because I am Poor, Obscure, Plain and little, that I am Soulless and Heartless. I have just as much soul as you and full as much heart"

It was a very heart warming story, althought there were some inconsistities but they didnt matter too much. Overall Lovely!!!!

on Nov. 7 2011 at 12:39 am
FallenAngel1 SILVER, Chula Vista, California
9 articles 0 photos 68 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Good Night, good night! Parting is such sweet sorrow, that i shall say good night till it be morrow."-Romeo and Juliet act II scene II, William Shakespeare
"What's In a name? That which we call a rosse by any other name would smell as sweet."-Romeo

My God, i want to cry right now, my eyes are filled to the brim with tears, but with joy, he will be saved!!!!

on Nov. 5 2011 at 2:07 pm
JustAnotherDay. BRONZE, Andover, Ohio
2 articles 1 photo 130 comments

Favorite Quote:
Stephen Fry - There are many people out there that will tell you that "you can't". What you've got to do is turn around and say, "watch me."

Yay! :DDDD

MeIsMe18 said...
on Nov. 5 2011 at 2:00 pm
MeIsMe18, Roswell, New Mexico
0 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
When one door of happiness closes, another opens; But often we look so long at the closed door that we do not see the one that has been opened for us.

Haha yeah sorry about that and I'm already working on more so more chapters will be up soon(:

on Nov. 3 2011 at 4:20 pm
JustAnotherDay. BRONZE, Andover, Ohio
2 articles 1 photo 130 comments

Favorite Quote:
Stephen Fry - There are many people out there that will tell you that "you can't". What you've got to do is turn around and say, "watch me."

That is cute. (: I need more. Of course. It kinda took you forever, but it turned out to be worth the wait. 

on Nov. 1 2011 at 6:33 pm
LoveAshley BRONZE, Minerva, Ohio
1 article 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don't matter, and those who matter don't mind" (:

This is so good! (:

on Jul. 20 2011 at 6:20 pm
FallenAngel1 SILVER, Chula Vista, California
9 articles 0 photos 68 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Good Night, good night! Parting is such sweet sorrow, that i shall say good night till it be morrow."-Romeo and Juliet act II scene II, William Shakespeare
"What's In a name? That which we call a rosse by any other name would smell as sweet."-Romeo

Please write more!!! This is great, you should publish it when you are done.

MeIsMe18 said...
on Jun. 25 2011 at 11:05 pm
MeIsMe18, Roswell, New Mexico
0 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
When one door of happiness closes, another opens; But often we look so long at the closed door that we do not see the one that has been opened for us.

Actually i hit a bump but i started over on the second part but trust me i won't let you down:)

on Jun. 21 2011 at 7:05 am
twizzlerluva97 GOLD, New York City, New York
13 articles 0 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Success comes to those who persist after all have given up. Which is why it is never crowded along the extra mile."

ooooh ahhhh i love it like alot more please

on Jun. 20 2011 at 1:42 pm
JustAnotherDay. BRONZE, Andover, Ohio
2 articles 1 photo 130 comments

Favorite Quote:
Stephen Fry - There are many people out there that will tell you that "you can't". What you've got to do is turn around and say, "watch me."

When will you have more?

MeIsMe18 said...
on Jun. 20 2011 at 1:39 pm
MeIsMe18, Roswell, New Mexico
0 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
When one door of happiness closes, another opens; But often we look so long at the closed door that we do not see the one that has been opened for us.

haha i will

on Jun. 20 2011 at 1:30 pm
JustAnotherDay. BRONZE, Andover, Ohio
2 articles 1 photo 130 comments

Favorite Quote:
Stephen Fry - There are many people out there that will tell you that "you can't". What you've got to do is turn around and say, "watch me."

EXACTLY :P Yeah, keep up the good work, and get more :P

MeIsMe18 said...
on Jun. 20 2011 at 1:27 pm
MeIsMe18, Roswell, New Mexico
0 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
When one door of happiness closes, another opens; But often we look so long at the closed door that we do not see the one that has been opened for us.

Haha don't you hate it when your watching a really good tv show or something and right when it gets to the good part it goes to commercial yeah i thought of that when i stopped it lol

MeIsMe18 said...
on Jun. 20 2011 at 1:26 pm
MeIsMe18, Roswell, New Mexico
0 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
When one door of happiness closes, another opens; But often we look so long at the closed door that we do not see the one that has been opened for us.

Heck yeah im gonna finish it lol it's going to be great.

MeIsMe18 said...
on Jun. 20 2011 at 1:25 pm
MeIsMe18, Roswell, New Mexico
0 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
When one door of happiness closes, another opens; But often we look so long at the closed door that we do not see the one that has been opened for us.

Haha i am already on it :)

on Jun. 19 2011 at 1:15 pm
JustAnotherDay. BRONZE, Andover, Ohio
2 articles 1 photo 130 comments

Favorite Quote:
Stephen Fry - There are many people out there that will tell you that "you can't". What you've got to do is turn around and say, "watch me."

I need more! It was wonderful, and that was a bad/good? spot to end it XD

on Jun. 16 2011 at 11:10 pm
BrownEyedGirl GOLD, San Antonio, Texas
11 articles 2 photos 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
If life were easy, where is the adventure?
If you never leap, you will never know what it is like to fly.

I loved it!  You have to finish it!


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