Just another Summer Romance

December 28, 2010
By Slugger20 BRONZE, Lindale, Texas
Slugger20 BRONZE, Lindale, Texas
1 article 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you can look up, you can get up -anonomys


Summary:

Kara and Katie's Parents ship the off to Cape Cod for the summer because they are having som marital issues. Here Katie and Kara meet some friends when they make a wrong turn onto some private property where Katie meets Haiden. Katie and Haiden spend time together, and who knows, they might just end up in "Just Another Summer Love." You'll have to read and see


Stephanie W.

Just another Summer Romance


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J1029 SILVER said...
on May. 13 2012 at 10:40 pm
J1029 SILVER, Tampa, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Sing like no one is listening,
Dance like no one is watching,
Love like you've never been hurt and
Live like it's heaven on earth.

- Mark Twain

I like it, but the diolouge is confusing. You should make a new paragraph for each new speaker, because I got lost with who was talking. Other than that it's good.

Kuro Usagi said...
on Oct. 28 2011 at 11:34 am
wow this book sounds very interesting

teenagedream said...
on Sep. 29 2011 at 5:07 pm
enteresting!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

on Aug. 10 2011 at 8:55 am
Country_Storm_Inspired, The Colony, Texas
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This story is amazing!!(:(: I can't wait until you write more!(: maybe you could check out my work?

on Jul. 5 2011 at 1:22 pm
Slugger20 BRONZE, Lindale, Texas
1 article 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you can look up, you can get up -anonomys

sometime soon. I don't like to post until i have several chapters ready... im getting there :) Thanks for commenting, it means alot!

on Jul. 5 2011 at 1:20 pm
Slugger20 BRONZE, Lindale, Texas
1 article 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you can look up, you can get up -anonomys

Thanks! im thinking about taking this down and changing it up a bit. im going to keep the beginning, but change it when they meet Lizzie and Haiden. And im going to change the type of story it is. its still going to be a romance, but im going to throw in some action/ thriller... i got some ideas :)

RRRRR BRONZE said...
on Jul. 1 2011 at 4:01 pm
RRRRR BRONZE, Orrville, Ohio
1 article 1 photo 83 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Education is when you read the fine print. Experience is when you don't."- Pete Seeger

"I didn't quit because I wasn't strong enough to live through it, i stopped because i was strong enough to move on." -Unknown

I like the plot alot, but i think you should say something in between the dialogue, maybe add some more details. It can get kind of confusing.

on Jul. 1 2011 at 10:59 am
Slugger20 BRONZE, Lindale, Texas
1 article 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you can look up, you can get up -anonomys

thanks!! You guys really dont know how much yalls comments mean!!!

on Jul. 1 2011 at 10:58 am
Slugger20 BRONZE, Lindale, Texas
1 article 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you can look up, you can get up -anonomys

thanks, im trying!!! idk wut to do next... any ideas???

on Jul. 1 2011 at 10:58 am
Slugger20 BRONZE, Lindale, Texas
1 article 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you can look up, you can get up -anonomys

thank you! im working on it!!! THANKS!!

 


on Jul. 1 2011 at 10:57 am
Slugger20 BRONZE, Lindale, Texas
1 article 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you can look up, you can get up -anonomys

Im working on it!!! :)

on Jul. 1 2011 at 10:56 am
Slugger20 BRONZE, Lindale, Texas
1 article 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you can look up, you can get up -anonomys

Thanks!! im working on it... in trying to think of some kind of even to put in there that would liven up the story....

on Jun. 30 2011 at 10:45 pm
Slugger20 BRONZE, Lindale, Texas
1 article 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you can look up, you can get up -anonomys

Thanks! i miss you too!!! YOU need to text me!!! You need to post some of your songs on here A.S.A.P.!!!!! <3 ya!!

on Jun. 30 2011 at 10:44 pm
Slugger20 BRONZE, Lindale, Texas
1 article 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you can look up, you can get up -anonomys

no andi, i think she would be proud of me :)

on Jun. 30 2011 at 10:42 pm
Slugger20 BRONZE, Lindale, Texas
1 article 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you can look up, you can get up -anonomys

no, i think she would be proud of me. :)

on Jun. 29 2011 at 10:26 pm
savannah tranby, Hawarden, Iowa
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when u gonna post more. :)

Andi14022 said...
on Jun. 10 2011 at 3:44 am
Andi14022, Lindale, Texas
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Hey, little advise could you indent when you start a new paragraph... Ms. Streich would be so ashamed:(

GBoland BRONZE said...
on Jun. 6 2011 at 4:12 pm
GBoland BRONZE, Chantilly, Virginia
1 article 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Parting is such sweet sorrow." - Shakesphere

I love your story... please write more!

smiles7 BRONZE said...
on Jun. 6 2011 at 10:45 am
smiles7 BRONZE, Lindale, Texas
2 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
Go forth my good and faithful servant!





- God

girl your story is amazing!!!!! i miss you soo much! how are you?!?!?!?

keep writeing it! ive still not finished any of mine but i hope to :) txt me!!!!!   (903)-941-0794   :)


on May. 28 2011 at 8:57 am
Angie_101 BRONZE, Minneapolis Mnn, Minnesota
2 articles 2 photos 23 comments
it's a really good story...please write more(i'm waiting for the next part)...


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