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Summary: Every one has heard about the fall of Lucifer but no one has heard this version.

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TaylorWintry This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 5, 2014 at 12:29 pm
Hey there. I write my comments live, just so you know, so you can better feel my exact emotions as I'm reading. So off we go! WOW. Way to hit me with adjectives! You're awesome at describing stuff. I would like this kind of stuff to narrate my life. XD Anyway, I feel like a character shouldn't describe their own body if they can't see it. For example, in first person, saying "my curved figure" seems odd to me. I can understand the hair part because you can see it, but describing your own body in... (more »)

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