You and I

June 25, 2011
By ani70, Lexington, Massachusetts
ani70, Lexington, Massachusetts
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Summary:

A girl (unnamed) has been friends with her best guy friend for what seems like forever. They've shared everything with one another. But then the times come when it seems that she and her best guy friend end up caring for one another as more than just friends, yet when one feels that way, the other doesn't, or the other doesn't know about the feelings. However, this time the girl is longing for him to really like her. Will it be a fairytale ending?


Anindita C.

You and I


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ani70 said...
on Aug. 16 2011 at 5:04 pm
ani70, Lexington, Massachusetts
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aww thanks Ahna!

Ahna said...
on Aug. 16 2011 at 11:53 am
Congrats girl!
By the way, <3 this story

ani70 said...
on Aug. 12 2011 at 1:48 pm
ani70, Lexington, Massachusetts
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thank you carol!

ani70 said...
on Aug. 12 2011 at 1:47 pm
ani70, Lexington, Massachusetts
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thanks ho11y!

carol said...
on Aug. 12 2011 at 9:33 am
never read a more realistic-- realistic fiction story. great job!

ani70 said...
on Aug. 11 2011 at 9:10 am
ani70, Lexington, Massachusetts
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For sure! Thanks!

ho11y said...
on Aug. 8 2011 at 8:11 pm
i thought this story was really emotional and human, which made it really realistic. you were really good at writing it in her point of view and getting in her mind to show how she feels. awesome ending, by the way! :)

mosho said...
on Jul. 28 2011 at 9:46 pm
keep writing! good stuff

ani70 said...
on Jul. 24 2011 at 3:24 pm
ani70, Lexington, Massachusetts
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the girl's goal is to the squirrel being able or ont able to reach the nut.

ani70 said...
on Jul. 24 2011 at 3:23 pm
ani70, Lexington, Massachusetts
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purpose: metaphor/symbol :D

LizBiz said...
on Jul. 24 2011 at 12:26 pm
but I have to ask why you have a random squirrel in there.

ani70 said...
on Jul. 24 2011 at 11:12 am
ani70, Lexington, Massachusetts
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thank you for your comment. yes i agree with you the phone conversation gets a bit confusing. im glad you liked it though. thanks a lot!

jenhen said...
on Jul. 24 2011 at 10:03 am
nice plot. sometimes i got confused with who was saying what during the phone call. but i was able to figure it out. not bad. pretty good story. nice effort 

ani70 said...
on Jul. 24 2011 at 9:06 am
ani70, Lexington, Massachusetts
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Do you think I should write a second part to this? Or leave it as it is?

ani70 said...
on Jul. 24 2011 at 9:00 am
ani70, Lexington, Massachusetts
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Lizzzz please show this to your other interested friends who like a story with a twist! Again thanks for reading this!

ani70 said...
on Jul. 24 2011 at 8:59 am
ani70, Lexington, Massachusetts
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Please Please Please show my story to your other friends or just keep voting and reading and keep commenting. I like to know some critical things about it as well as some good things about it! So yeah! Thanks guys and dolls!

ani70 said...
on Jul. 24 2011 at 8:58 am
ani70, Lexington, Massachusetts
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Hi Readers, Friends, FriendsandReaders,
Thanks for reading this story! It means a lot to me!

ani70 said...
on Jul. 24 2011 at 8:57 am
ani70, Lexington, Massachusetts
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oh and thanks for reading/commenting and voting. means a lot!

ani70 said...
on Jul. 24 2011 at 8:55 am
ani70, Lexington, Massachusetts
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any critical comments though?

ani70 said...
on Jul. 24 2011 at 8:53 am
ani70, Lexington, Massachusetts
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yeah i really wanted the ending to kind of surprise people and kind of set my ending away from typical teenage love endings...


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