Pressure

May 8, 2011
By Gaaaaaby BRONZE, Randolph, New Jersey
Gaaaaaby BRONZE, Randolph, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
Happiness can be found even in the darkest of times,, when one only remembers to turn on the light. ~Albus Dumbledor


Summary:

Lissa Andrews isn't in the "in crowd". She comes from an abusive house hold and has unorthodox coping skills.
She has only three people she feels that she can trust in her life. One that she loves, one that loves her but she only thinks of him as a brother, and a best friend.
How is it that she can still get through the year with the rumors started about her? Are they all lies? Or are they all variations of the truth?


Gabby R.

Pressure


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on May. 11 2011 at 7:00 pm
Gaaaaaby BRONZE, Randolph, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
Happiness can be found even in the darkest of times,, when one only remembers to turn on the light. ~Albus Dumbledor

Thank you, I know there must have been some because I've never had anyone read it before.  I'll have to go and look harder. I'm going to make Lexi come back, I'm just not sure how or when yet

on May. 11 2011 at 6:50 pm
Gaaaaaby BRONZE, Randolph, New Jersey
3 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
Happiness can be found even in the darkest of times,, when one only remembers to turn on the light. ~Albus Dumbledor

Thank you :) I'm planning on writing more, I'm just not sure when it will be up

on May. 11 2011 at 5:50 pm
Donttrust BRONZE, Fort Collins, Colorado
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This is amazing!
are you going on or  is this  the end?

on May. 11 2011 at 1:35 pm
becauseHeloves BRONZE, Chesapeake, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
Proverbs 8:12, 14 "I wisdom dwell with prudence, and find out knowledge of witty inventions. Counsel is mine, and sound wisdom: I am understanding; I have strength."

This was pretty good! It has some grammatical errors but for the most part it was realistic and heart-wrenching. I love the plot, but I can't help but feel that this was a bit rushed... like when Lexie made a surprise appearance, it was pretty unexpected, especially since nothing was mentioned of her before- her being Lissa's best friend. I think you should have mentioned her at least twice before her appearance, because you know it was like a magic act: now you see me, now you don't....if there are more chapters coming will Lexie come back or is that something that I'll have to tune in and find out? I'll be waiting :)




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