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Tất cả sẽ giảm (All Shall Fall)

Bridget S.
Tất cả sẽ giảm (All Shall Fall)
Summary: While researching, Tie^n had found a top secret file on the computer. Apparently, the idiot who was updating the file did not completely shut it down. Tie^n just laughed. These people could be complete idiots. She looked at a report that claimed that Confucianism, their way of life, was taking away the innovation and exploration within the country. Children are not able to use their imagination as much and can not quiet their curiosity. It also said that the women were limited to small tasks and little freedom because of male dominance.

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perchance_2_dream said...
Apr. 17, 2011 at 8:27 pm

I think this is a very good story. However, i have a few suggestions. (Please don't take this too hard, i think this story could easily become better and better)


First, it would be better to have more information leading up to the rebellion, more about what she thought about America or something. 

Second, i think that a little more detail everywhere would help a little. 

Like, how old are they? what do they look like? When they speak, what kind of... (more »)


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